The Hunt

April9

“Ready, set, GO! “  The Church Director shouted as the children scurried everywhere picking up multicolored Easter eggs. The church lawn was scattered with a rainbow of plastic eggs, and the soft yellow, blue, pink, orange, and green pastel colors glimmered in the warm sunlight. Laughter and screams of small children filled the air as their grubby little hands fought over the eggs, which were filled with such things as candy and small prizes like green Army men.

“It’s MINE!” a small voice yelled over the crowd.

“No, it’s MINE!” a bigger voice roared, as a large hand grabbed at the smaller hand’s egg, stole it, and ran off. The sound of crying then filled the air.

“No fighting!” The Church Director yelled, drowned out by the hysterical screams and merriment of the crowd of children.

The six-year-old boy who just had his egg stolen clutched his sky blue basket close to his chest and ran, crying hysterically, but trying to hide it, into the nearby forest. The smell of pine needles, bark, mud, and grass filled his nose as he stepped onto the plush, mushy forest ground. When he looked up, all he could see forever into the never-ending sky was bright green leaves and dark branches looming overhead like arms of demons. It was shady, almost completely dark, as the sun had very little space to peek at him.

As he continued deeper into the woods, his knuckles became whiter and whiter around his basket. He turned to look back, but he could no longer see or hear the church festivities. He plopped down onto the plush ground, tears streaming down his rosy red, plump apple cheeks. His crystal clear blue eyes looked straight ahead, terrified and wishing he would have never left his mommy.

He went to place his basket on the ground next to him so that he could look around to get his bearings, but it was stuck on something. He pulled harder, but it didn’t seem to be working. Finally, he stood up and used all of his 50 pounds to pull as hard as he could, and the basket came loose as he fell backwards onto the ground.

Dangling in front of his face hanging from the bottom of the basket was a dismembered human finger. He looked toward the place where his basket had gotten stuck and was horrified to see the head priest’s body laying motionless on the ground. The young boy let out a blood curdling scream, dropped his basket, and sprinted back in the direction he thought he had come from, forgetting all about the Easter egg madness.

17 Comments to

“The Hunt”

  1. On April 9th, 2010 at 10:41 pm Marisa Birns Says:

    It always is a scary thing to run deep into the woods alone. Bad things happen!

    Laughter and screams from children playing happily and searching for the colorful eggs, and screams from a child finding darkness and death.

    Very eerily good.

  2. On April 15th, 2010 at 11:17 pm Deanna Schrayer Says:

    Oh my gosh this was hard to read, but only because it was so eerily good. Yep, it’s best to stay out of those woods!

  3. On April 16th, 2010 at 3:12 pm mazzz_in_Leeds Says:

    Awww, poor little chap, he’s not having a good day at all is he?!

  4. On April 18th, 2010 at 3:01 pm Cathy Olliffe Says:

    Scary, great pace, nice ending… I’m glad it wasn’t the child who got dead!
    Good work!

  5. On April 19th, 2010 at 8:34 pm Valerie Says:

    Whoa! This story doesn’t feel over, it feels like it’s just starting. Poor kid, but really, poor priest.

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